Monthly Critique [Our Writers Sound Off]
As a new feature here on Digital Photography School, we are going to start a guest panel of DPS writers to critique one photo a month. The writers for DPS have a wide range of backgrounds and experience and most of have been into digital photography for at least five to seven years. This is not meant as a scientific, objective review of the photo at hand, but instead is meant to give a wide variety of opinions on a particular piece. Each critique is simply the opinion of the DPS writers – and of course we’d love you to join us in the review by leaving constructive feedback in comments below.
This month’s photo was sent in by Vasco Casquilho from Portugal. First the image and then the critiques.
And now for the critiques from DPS writers:
Barrie Smith – “I feel this is an excellent attempt at the technique but feel, if it were a frame from a burst of shots, that a frame before or after would have been better. I know how difficult these shots are to catch successfully but still think it needs more definition on the bullfighter. One solution is to crop the shot down to the left half of the picture, showing only the bulls head and the bullfighter; the bull’s extended torso spoils the comp.”
Helen Bradley – “I like the motion in this image a lot although I find the area of saturated red at the top of the image a little distracting. I would prefer a tighter crop to remove some of this so the eye is focused more on the centre of the action – the bull’s head and the matador.”
Chas Elliot- “I love it when photographers break out of the mold of needing to have everything sharp and in focus. Using long shutter speeds and shaking the camera can result in abstract photos full of interesting shapes and streaks of light. What I like about this photo is that it’s right on the edge of being abstract or being a traditional action shot. The colors and shapes are striking, with the added benefit of being able to recognize the action in the scene. I’d hang it on my wall”
Jim Goldstein – “I am quite impressed with Vasco’s photograph. The longer shutter speed to create the motion blur of the fast moving action is quite captivating. Whether intentional or not I also find the layering of color, light and shadow created by the panning to add a great deal of interest. Some might fret over the lack of detail in the bull, but this is a non-issue for me. The dynamic range of the scene is greater than the ability of the camera sensor or film to capture. One could brighten the shadows when post-processing, but I think that would be a mistake. The motion blur provides an abstract feel that does not need to be weighted down with subject detail. In addition the darker bull provides an anchor to the image and a source of contrast that keeps my eye glued to the scene. While I think this image is quite strong as is I’d hope that Vasco was able to get alternate takes on the action with varying shutter speeds. The matador is a little washed out from his quick movement and might take on a slightly more recognizable form with a quicker shutter speed. Another thing I hope Vasco was able to experiment with is varying focal lengths. While I find the tight crop of this photograph to work quite well it might be nice to have choices as to how much one could crop in on the action. All in all a very appealing photograph that is a pleasure to view.”
Natalie Norton- “For me a photograph is strong when it makes me feel, not think. When I first saw this photo I wasn’t thinking, about the composition, I wasn’t thinking about the color, I wasn’t thinking about the choice of lens or settings, I was feeling. When a photo really makes me feel the rest is irrelevant.”
Peter Carey – “I absolutely love the action in this shot. In particular, the little bit of dirt that is kicked up by the bull and shown on its flank. While the matador is not clear or really visible in this image, I think it helps to remove that element and reduce him to just color, including the cape. The timing, for me, was perfect with this shot. Any later and the horns would be obscured and they play an important role in the shot. Any earlier and the bull would not be in full stride really showing its strength. Further, I like that the maroon color at the top and how it is an even third of the image, helping center the bull in a way. Also, by not including the bulls haunches in the photo, I feel a far greater sense of fluid given to its body, making it flow into the frame from right. All in all, I love this photo and think it’s a great shot.”
What do you think or feel about Vasco’s photo? Please share your opinion in the comments section below and remember, keep if friendly, please, whether you like the shot or not.




28 Responses to “Monthly Critique [Our Writers Sound Off]” - Add Yours
March 24th, 2009 at 1:49 am
A great capture in my opinion. The lower back of the bull shows the power, the front shows the energy, the color lifts it to new heights.
A great image in my opinion, it requires some study to get all the aspects, yet holds enough detail to form an opinion of the scene.
Great work!!
March 24th, 2009 at 2:10 am
Great picture. One of the things it makes it great is the fact is not the typical picture of the “torero” and the bull frozen in action. I like the sense of motion.
I disagree with Helen about the red in the top of the picture. If you are familiar with bullfighting, it only adds more to the picture.
March 24th, 2009 at 2:30 am
I take photos just for myself mainly for prosperity. My work flow includes deleting any noticably blurred shots or shots with eyes closed etc. Every now and then, there is one that I can’t bring myself to tag to be deleted.
This photo shows me that my intuition is correct and that I should go with it more often.
I love the colors and the flow. It took me just a breif moment to size up that I’m at a bull fight. Having been at a few in my lifetime, this photo captures the excitement, beauty, and contrast of the dance between a madator and his bull.
I enjoyed reading all the critiques. I like this additon to your sight and hope other readers find it as insightful as I did. If only to remind ourselves that while we are capturing an image of something real, it is still art.
March 24th, 2009 at 2:43 am
Great new feature for the site.
March 24th, 2009 at 3:00 am
What I really like is that the bull seems to go on forever, as if everything is been pulled into a whirlpool of color
also how the light is just been caught on the black fur of the bulls back
March 24th, 2009 at 9:31 am
That is just a beautiful shot. I really makes me feel the mass and power of the bull, against the speed and agility of the matador. And the best part was getting that feeling before recognizing the situation. I hope I get to take at least one picture like that sometime in the future.
March 24th, 2009 at 10:36 pm
I simply love this shot. The movement, weird balance, the striations of color and light that make up the bullfighter, the foreground and the middle-background. The band of maroon at the seems a bit too smooth and intense, but that’s a small quibble! Wonder how it would look if the bull was even less in focus?
March 24th, 2009 at 10:57 pm
This picture captures power in many aspects like powerful colors, the bull is very powerful coming down in stride (horn in more focus) and the matador obviously has power and the picture portrays that he is using that power to stay safe of that horn.
I tried different cropping and the picture lost its power and beauty so I like it just the way it is. Awesome job!
March 24th, 2009 at 11:15 pm
Really a beautiful shot. The matador would not have been as effective were it not for the kaleidescope of blurred color. That very much helps to define him into something recognizable, even though he’s not quite recognizable at all in the traditional sense. When it’s not bogged down in literal representation, photography is about artistic interpretation. On that front, this is a very successful shot.
March 24th, 2009 at 11:51 pm
I really like the colour and the teriffic feeling of movement in the shot. I agree that a tighter crop may have worked well, but on the other hand with this crop, the muscles and power of the Bull are very obvious.
All in all, a great capture, Vasco!
March 25th, 2009 at 1:21 am
I really like the feeling of the shot… I feel the bull’s frustration, a large solid object, barely blurred – trying to hit the matador, who leaves merely a blur where he once was. The picture shows clearly the relative speed and power of the combatants. The matador, small and weak compared to the bull, but moving much much faster.
March 25th, 2009 at 1:43 am
The powerful solidity of the bull vs. the insubstantial nature of the bullfighter and cape makes this a remarkable, alive and quite terrifying image! I call that a success!
March 25th, 2009 at 11:33 am
one a month!? Lets do one a week!
March 25th, 2009 at 5:20 pm
I like the motion of this picture and I guess the photographer attempts to have this motion. Unfortunately, since the person is too blur and practically just motion of waves, for me and in my own standard, I will erase this pic from my memory card and computer. Regards!
March 26th, 2009 at 10:42 pm
I’m going to be the first to depart and say that I would have liked to see the matador *slightly* more in focus. Just a little tiny bit more to show the man. Perhaps you have one like that and it just doesn’t look right. Maybe it has to be tack sharp or an abstract form. But that’s the absolute first impression I had.
Overall I think it’s an amazing shot. I disagree with the reviewer who suggested a crop. I think the flowing of the bull out of the frame as one of the other comments said – he seems to go on forever.
March 27th, 2009 at 1:39 am
awesome shot no doubt..
what about to freeze the bull and the matador in a clear shot with burred backgound would be outsatanding too … as it will emphasize more the impression of power and speed in that action.
regards great picture
March 27th, 2009 at 9:29 am
It’s a nice shot, composition is well done and the colors are very striking. But it kind of makes my eyes hurt haha. Yes, the matador slightly more in focus could work, and I would also like to see a crop on the other end of the picture, giving the bull somewhere to go and cropping that distractingly ridiculous long body of his! Good stuff though!
March 27th, 2009 at 10:19 am
POersonally, I do not like this image as I have no idea what it is supposed to be
March 27th, 2009 at 10:25 am
The length of the bull’s body kept drawing my eye away from the matador. Since it’s too late to focus or discern the matador the only option left to make this pix work, is to crop the bull just before the hump. I would also crop a smidge off the bottom. This leaves a well defined abstract action shot that captures the energy within a tight frame.
March 28th, 2009 at 5:30 am
I could not enjoy this pic.
March 28th, 2009 at 9:05 am
I could not figure out what the photograph was until reading comments. When looking at it at first I would’ve said I hated it. After looking for awhile and reading all the comments I have a little more respect. Like others I always delete everything with the slightest blur. It scares me to take photos that are blurry because I could be capturing a perfectly clear and crisp action shot at the same moment.
Thanks for posting! It is a neat shot.
March 28th, 2009 at 11:06 am
I don’t like the image because I can’t figure out what the photograph’s trying to convey or the story behind the photo? To me, it’s just a mass of blurry colours and forms.
March 29th, 2009 at 3:44 am
So much of current photography concentrates on the technical – pin-sharp pics, often overblown colour etc. (Look at the current shelves of photo-mags – does anyone else hate them?)
It is a pleasure to see a composition that is both artistic and presented for one’s reaction. Abstraction is a great challenge – to plan and capture.
The comments from others confirm the feelings that this image conveys. Who cares whether it is immediately “interpretable” or showing fine detail – that is so often the realm of snappers – not artistic photographers (in my opinion!)
This is an image that conveys so much and leads into deeper interpretation as you look at it – motion, colour then subject matter combining beauty and abject cruelty, solidity and frailty, speed and agility etc etc!!
Nice one
March 29th, 2009 at 10:50 am
Mark P
Nicely put!
March 29th, 2009 at 9:11 pm
nice photograph
March 30th, 2009 at 4:58 pm
I don’t know what to think.. I had not seen the matador, the whole pic borders on abstract (almost like a painting), I would have loved a little more clarity but something would have been lost. As with many others I am yet to be enthralled by abstracts ( I am short sighted already so a blurry image only makes it worse for me) but overall, I give it my thumbs up (for creating a feeling)
March 30th, 2009 at 5:53 pm
I like the timing of this shot. It tells a great sense of motion and energy, from both the matador and the bull. The framing was very well done as it clearly shows the monstrous built of the bull relative to the matador. And, a good dynamic range. A picture like this can’t get any better, only different.
March 31st, 2009 at 11:22 pm
After 27 comments, I think I should say something, as a collective reply.
First of all, my sincere thank you all for taking the time to watch and critique. All critiques are very welcome. They only make me better. For instance, i never thought about a different kind of crop, but it seems some of you would have done it. Makes me think.
Also, it is easier to understand this photo for people that come from countries where bullfights are part of the culture.
The blur was kind of a necessity. There wasn´t enough light available, so I had to improvise. And started to play. I have 7 more from that day, here: http://www.desfocado.com/index.php?showimage=33
Would love to see you all visiting my website, and leave comments/critiques.
My big, big thank you for DPS for this website in general and showing my work in particular.
All my best
Vasco
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