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Old 01-10-2010, 12:12 AM
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This is the shot for today:

Larger pic can be seen in my blog.
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Old 01-10-2010, 12:28 AM
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Very interesting shot....I guess someone reads a lot. You deserve congrats for sticking with it for a week! Better than I would do.
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Thanks for the interesting shot. Speaking without seeing the original, I would prefer a crop that removed the bed from the right and extended past the lamp shade on the left. Keep up the good work.
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My idea was to show a little from the bed but maybe you are right, I will try a shot without the bed to see if it is better
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Without seeing it another way, I kinda like seeing the bed a bit. For me, it adds a very little to the story.

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Without seeing it another way, I kinda like seeing the bed a bit. For me, it adds a very little to the story.

Nice shot
How did you deduce that it is a bed? It might be a piece of wood, a big chess board, and so on....... Isnt it? May be you also thought so from the one that commented before you. If that is so, then you ask that person the same question that I just asked you.
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haha, you are right lexton. You can't know for sure that it is a bed
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