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Old 09-08-2009, 03:10 PM
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Just wanted to share this shot with all of you.

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Old 09-08-2009, 03:28 PM
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Nice DOF. The colors don't look much vibrant. Maybe increasing the saturation will help.
Also, the font for the watermark, try a thin font on the bottom right side of the berries. jes a suggestion tho.
Overall a very good picture.
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Old 09-10-2009, 07:02 PM
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Thank you for your reply. I'll have ago of altering the colours after.
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Old 09-10-2009, 07:04 PM
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I totally agree, the DOF is fantastic but the watermark looks ugly compared to the picture, it shouldn't take focus away from the main subject... again, just my opinion, I'm no professional.
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shoot some more photos buddy, you will get better photos
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Old 09-10-2009, 07:15 PM
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Please get rid of the font!

Make it more lively as mentioned in first reply.
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Old 09-10-2009, 09:23 PM
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Thank you all for your comments.....Is this one any better ?

berries
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Old 09-10-2009, 09:58 PM
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is this one any better ?
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