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hi guys here is my new uploads. hope you'll like it. I am open to any kind of comments and/or criticisms. thanks in advance.


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Old 08-24-2009, 10:26 AM
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The first shot is overkilled. Only the third one is interesting.
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Old 08-24-2009, 11:16 AM
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hi guys here is my new uploads. hope you'll like it. I am open to any kind of comments and/or criticisms. thanks in advance.


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Old 08-24-2009, 11:22 AM
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The third is my favorite.
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Old 08-24-2009, 11:41 AM
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Interesting shots. In the first I would remove the reflection in the upper left side. The third shot is very good.
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Old 08-24-2009, 03:10 PM
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Thank you so much for leaving your comments. i really appreciate it.
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Old 08-24-2009, 03:13 PM
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Interesting shots. In the first I would remove the reflection in the upper left side. The third shot is very good.
Hi Heaterguy. Originally was trying to make an effect in the first photo, i was trying to show the traces of the person which is shown by the reflection. thanks so much anyway. like what i have said i appreciate everything man.
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I like where you tried to go on #1. I think a lower angle and either capturing the people and their reflection or just the water would have been a home run. Instead, if this image had been a hit, you would have of been robbed at the fence. So, try cropping #1 without the reflection and see what you think. Hey, we all hit a pop fly for an easy out now and again. Just keep swingin' for the fences!
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#3 is definitely a fav! Great silhouettes off focus! Nice work!
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Old 08-24-2009, 04:51 PM
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Welcome to DPS, I really like the 3rd shot, love silhouettes, and the light trails in the 4th shot are pretty cool too. Looking forward to seeing more, thanks.
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