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Old 08-21-2009, 06:29 PM
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Inspector Beachcomber arrived in his beat up old car..his suit crumpled and his hair was a mess, but his reputation for solving crimes was near to perfect.
He told us to sit down and dont touch anything while he went out to search the grounds for clues.



Jake wasnt the type to sit still when he knew there was a crime to solve...he went into the study and looked around...cobwebs hung from the corners of the dark musty room. Jake spotted the desk and walked over to it He opened the drawer and started to rummage through the papers.
He found a photo...she was beautiful but there was a sinister look about her. She wore a black veil covering her face...but there was something very familiar about her.




he tried to think..where had he seen her? Suddenly it came to him...the black widow...
He had seen her photo on the wanted board at the station.

WANTED

Jake grabbed the photo and headed back out to the other room where his wife was waiting..She jumped up. " What did you find Jake, did you find a clue?"
Yeah doll take a look at this. We better go and get Inspector Beachcomber...
Jake and his wife went outside and found the Inspector out by the shed.." you better come and look at this". the inspector said with a worried look on his face.



what was in the shed...who killed the old lady...who done it and why? to be continued..
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Old 08-21-2009, 06:45 PM
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Hi there, Jake Pig detective here. We have a really puzzling case here and I am studying the evidence. What a lovely old house this is and it has been worked on so well, I have a gorgeous portrait that someone went to a lot of trouble to set up and the pose was just right, then there is the wanted poster that I saw at the station that was made by a professional and the old shed with the open door, well I don't know what is in there but it is very nice from the outside and definitely inviting me to go and have a look. I wonder what I will find in there.
If anyone has any thoughts about who commited this horrible crime, I would be pleased to hear from you. This is such a puzzle.
Now, wheres that wife of mine. Hey! where are you doll.

Jake Pig is heading back to take a peek in the shed.
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Jake [voice over] It had been a long and dirty day, dirtier then forty bucks should buy

Angeleys: Is Harry there?
Jake: Yeah, yeah, he's here.

Angeleys: Put him on, will you?
Jake: He can't talk to you.

Angeleys: Why?
Jake: Because he's dead.

Jake [voiceover to self] So many guns lately; so few brains, some people didn't know when to quit
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great job there inspector Beachcomber...i know you will solve this crime with the help of my old man detective jake.

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Ok, I finally had the courage to peep round the door. The light has hit something but I can't make it out. Something is wrong. I can smell danger. But I am a great detective and I will work this one out. Has anyone any idea what this is. I think I need help.

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I like it ! .. love the photos and the presentation.. the first photo is really moody !! .. great storyline .. very entertaining and waiting to see the next chapter !

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OK, I'm hooked... Thanks guys. I'm waiting for the next installment...
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I like it ! .. love the photos and the presentation.. the first photo is really moody !! .. great storyline .. very entertaining and waiting to see the next chapter !

Vin
Thanks so much...gee these guys are making me use my brain for the storyline plus doing photos to go along with it ..im thankful the jakestar came up with this one..but we have had a lot of fun...glad your enjoying the story

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OK, I'm hooked... Thanks guys. I'm waiting for the next installment...
Hello Fred...were so glad your enjoying our silly postings...were trying to keep in mind that this is still a share your shots forum...so were using our photos added to go along with the storyline.

the plot thickens as we continue the next episode.
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Ok, I finally had the courage to peep round the door. The light has hit something but I can't make it out. Something is wrong. I can smell danger. But I am a great detective and I will work this one out. Has anyone any idea what this is. I think I need help.

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