Who did it ?

[angeleyes216]

Why did my husband detective Jake pig and I decide to go out of town on such a terrible stormy night? It was too late to turn back now, so we continued on, travelling down the old dirt road. An uneasy feeling came over me as the car started to make strange noises. Please don't let us break down way out here, the darkness was eerie and the flashes of lightening made everything seem sinister. We slowly travelled on, and then suddenly I saw the old house. Maybe there would be a phone so we could call for help.





Jake knocked on the door but no answer, so he tried to open it...the door creaked open and we slowly looked inside. The house smelt musty like it had been deserted for years. My heart was pounding as we entered the living room...it was like something out of an old 40's movie. We looked around for a phone when suddenly I spotted the body of an old haggled woman...she had been stabbed...the knife still sticking out of her chest..



" Don't touch anything" Jake yelled out...we have to find a phone and call Inspector Beachcomber, the police chief..... he'll know what to do!!!...

To be continued

[sheltiesmama]

The butler did it....! Nice set and very amusing.

[jakethepig]

Ok folks we had a day off in the bar today and decided to play with our other interest which is photography and pp skills. It is a fun way of displaying our photography skills.
I think this is going to be a great story. (I've seen the script). Watch out for some great characters along the way Especially the great detective Jake Pig lol

ha ha great start to the story Lorraine and great work on the spooky old house. This story is spooking me already and I'm in it. lol.

David and bessie and Detective Jake Pig.

xxxxxxx

[sheldonc]

can't wait for more

[angeleyes216]

Originally Posted by jakethepig

Ok folks we had a day off in the bar today and decided to play with our other interest which is photography and pp skills. It is a fun way of displaying our photography skills.
I think this is going to be a great story. (I've seen the script). Watch out for some great characters along the way Especially the great detective Jake Pig lol

ha ha great start to the story Lorraine and great work on the spooky old house. This story is spooking me already and I'm in it. lol.

David and bessie and Detective Jake Pig.

xxxxxxx

Thank you David the house was on the way home from michigan city and i couldnt resist playing with it ...ive said it before photography doesnt have to be boring

[moi]

CSI on the case.......................looking forward to the next chapter................very creative!

[ricklumpas]

Bwahahahahaha! What a funny story and great photography you have here.
Initially I guess it was also the butler "who did it". More! I can't wait for the next part.
It is nice to have people like you who take time time come up with stories to go with your photos. I enjoy this.


Are Jake and You, Lorraine real life partners? or is this just part of the story?

[angeleyes216]

Originally Posted by moi

CSI on the case.......................looking forward to the next chapter................very creative!

Thank you so much for your comments...i was nearly not going to post it, thinking that you might all think I had gone nuts but Jakestar and I have really been having so much fun with PP and the posts. There is so much to photography not like in the past...so many editing programes and different effects that can be done to photos. cropping to make more photos from one...its been really interesting photography wise to see what you can come up with and we both thank you for sharing in our fun and also seeing the photo side of it too.

Lorraine

[beachcomber]

[voiceover] It was one of those transient motels, something between a fleabag and a dive.

Billy Rolfe: "You're not a detective, Jake, you're a slot machine. You'll do anything for six bits."

[voiceover] He was right, I would have done anything for four bits but I didn't want him knowing that

Frances Amthor: "I think you're a very stupid person. You look stupid, you're in a stupid business, and you're on a stupid case."

Jake: "I get it. I'm stupid."

Moose Malloy: "You a private Dick?"

Jake: "No. I'm your fairy godmother"

[angeleyes216]

Originally Posted by ricklumpas

Bwahahahahaha! What a funny story and great photography you have here.
Initially I guess it was also the butler "who did it". More! I can't wait for the next part.
It is nice to have people like you who take time time come up with stories to go with your photos. I enjoy this.


Are Jake and You, Lorraine real life partners? or is this just part of the story?

No were not life partners...hes in the UK and im here in the USA ( from australia)..we started helping each other with photos, showing each other different techniques etc and it has become a great friendship. Dps is more than just a photography school...its a wonderful learning, sharing and friendship forum.