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Old 06-29-2009, 05:07 PM
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Beautiful they are. Do consider kicking up exposure a bit more next time, they seem to be a bit dark. Similarly, a generic composition rule (Rule of Thirds, for example) might add more beauty to these shots.

When composing, try to maintain focus on the subject by eliminating any attention grabbing elements, such as the sun-light grass in the first picture.

Great work and keep at it!

BTW, what camera are you using?
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Old 06-29-2009, 07:27 PM
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Thanks!

The camera i am using is a Fuji SD5600.


Thx foir the comments!
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Old 06-29-2009, 10:50 PM
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I love the yellow and purple int his shot, and I do agree with the previous comment about the sunlight in the top of the picture. Your camera was probably exposing somewhere between the two light sources and made the subject a little dark. Keep taking those photos. I'm looking forward to seeing more posts from you!
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Hi Lozzer , keep up the good work. It is nice seeing someone your age taking a real interest in photography, nice pictures to
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Old 06-30-2009, 08:51 PM
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Really nice beginning. You need a little more light on the subject. Stay in this forum you will learn a lot.
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