car streaking through the night

[toryw]

I still have alot of work to do to master these shots, starting to take these kind of pics.

[eugenem]

pic not uploaded --are you using flickr?

[toryw]

there we go its posted now

[AndCity]

What's the exif on this, how long was the exposure? I fancy having a go at long exposures. I used to do it with 35mm back in the day. The beauty of digital is that you can see your results straight away and re-shoot if it's no good.

[toryw]

d300
20s exposure
f14
18mm

[toryw]

what kinda things could i do to improve,

[BrentGambrell]

I really like this thing. My eyes are going back and forth from the clouds to the lights of the cars.

Wait until it's pitch black next time. Having only one focal point in the image is well enough in my opinion!


p.s. Shouldn't this be in the Critique?

[Drax]

Originally Posted by toryw

what kinda things could i do to improve,

Hi, Toryw!

Welcome @ DPS. Nice shot you've got there. Well, for me, the shot is good as it is. But if you want to get some critics and remarks for improvements, post it instead in the Landscape / Cityscape - Critique and don't forget to joint some detailed exifs and a specific question to guide the critics.

A link to your pictures will help those who want to learn. (They will be ableto see your camera settings for that very composition).

Cheers!!!

[toryw]

it was as dark as the night could be but i had exposure on 20s..

im new to this, i will post up next time info on the shot for sure

Thanks alot for the pointers. If i want some input ill post it in critiques..