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06-07-2009, 02:19 PM
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Julia and Gatorade
I can't decide whether her drinking helps or hinders the shot...
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06-07-2009, 03:15 PM
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It is a large part of the image and makes it a girl drinking out of a bottle of gatorade. I do find the copywright a huge distraction that over powers the entire image.
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06-07-2009, 05:11 PM
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Here's a copy without the watermark.
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06-07-2009, 05:54 PM
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That one is much more pleasant to view. I like the way she has eye contact with the camera and appears to be sucking on the bottle. Very cute. All of that was totally missed in your first image. By me anyway. Nice job.
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06-08-2009, 01:11 PM
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Moved from critique for lack of required information.
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