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Old 01-24-2010, 03:39 AM
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... taken today at the local fairgrounds.


Make = Canon
Model = Canon EOS 40D
Date Time = 2010-01-23 14:59:29

Exposure Time = 1/640"
F Number = F10
Exposure Program = Aperture priority
ISO Speed Ratings = 400
Flash = Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode
Focal Length = 146mm
White Balance = Auto white balance
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Old 01-24-2010, 08:06 AM
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Great shot in terms of capturing the action. Ideally, I'd like it not cropped quite so tightly on the right side (as I view the photograph) and probably a bit more along the bottom to make the crop factor work, but that's all quibbling, because in terms of composition, the shot's already working.

The bigger change I would make though is to work on the white balance. From my monitor's view, the snow looks a little gray, the sky a little smoggy, the trees a bit less green than I would like. Also, in terms of contrast, it's a little flat. Pulling up curves and setting the black, mid, and white points would help all of those elements and I think you'd find your photograph really snaps at that point.

Others may have a different view and as I said, the shot as composed is nicely dynamic, I love the flying snow.
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Old 01-25-2010, 12:35 AM
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Nice capture! Do you have a sharper frame of the image, it looks out of focus.
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