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Old 01-18-2010, 10:08 PM
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Old 01-18-2010, 10:31 PM
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Hello Steph,
First of all "Welcome" to a great site and a wonderful community, I really hope you enjoy your time here and get stuck in. Seeing as you say your a complete newbie to this hobby I have to say you done a really good job of capturing a moment here. Only thing I would have done different is check where the position of the sun was as I would have taken this from the right hand side and lessened the effect of the shadows across his face. Detail and colour are good and I feel this is a nice image to kick off your new hobby, I look forward to seeing more on here soon, especially seeing as your down in the Pompey area!!! Have fun and keep in touch.
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Old 01-18-2010, 11:28 PM
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David, many thanks for your comments, I wil keep an eye out for further shadows and sun position.
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I have no idea what this sport is supposed to be from the photo. I'm not sure that's the result you wanted?
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Old 01-19-2010, 02:34 PM
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I really like this shot. Yes the only bummer would be the shadow in his face, but this might be a shot you can do again if you can get him to jump up again. Even a full body shot. Good job!!
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Old 01-20-2010, 07:52 AM
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I'm with Wamplers. I have absolutely no clue what's going on in the picture and I can't imagine that's what you wanted in your pic. If you were going for a portrait, maybe this would be ok, but for an action shot, I just don't see it.
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The image is of a Rugby player waiting for the ball to arrive in a lineout.

To stepyw1,apart from the shadow perhaps have waited another second for the ball to arrive in the frame, may have helped others to understand what was going on.
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Old 01-20-2010, 05:59 PM
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To stepyw1,apart from the shadow perhaps have waited another second for the ball to arrive in the frame, may have helped others to understand what was going on.
Exactly...the lack of a ball breaks this shot for me. I don't follow rugby, thus didn't know what a "lineout" was until googling it after my last post. Even so, had the ball been in the shot I would have at least recognized it was rugby.
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Old 01-20-2010, 06:23 PM
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Thanks to all for their suggestions. I agree withh all and especially about not getting the ball into shot. Perhaps I should have posted in portraits, anyhow once again thanks and please have a look at my other post titled drive on. I think this is a better shot.
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