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Old 12-18-2009, 01:03 AM
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I wanted to get some feedback on this. Mainly on the composition of the individual pictures and then the actual look of the collage. Thank you for your help.

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Old 12-18-2009, 01:09 AM
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I think this collage is well done and unique. Anyone with a child in a sport would enjoy it! The only thing I would do different is maybe change the upper left corner shot to one where the player is facing the camera to match the other three. But that is just personal preference. Love it!
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Well, nothing is really happening in the four smaller pictures. There's no moment or action, there are barely any faces!
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From my experience, parents want shots of their kids, running with ball, catching the ball, kicking the ball...you get the picture
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Overall this looks great, the background image seems to have some clutter in it though
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