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#1.. OK I am new at this...I have read the rules ...and believe I have obey them all...if not PLEASE explain the one I violated… (in detail) ….since obviously I didn’t understand it.
This critique is the most important ….. I really do want to participate and I really need the help. #2… “Man On A Fast Horse will never notice” …is an old saying about shoddy workmanship. This picture was shot at a combined speed of approx 100 – 130 mph one handed with out aiming. I shoot a lot of this type pictures and need help with them....... the driving is OK haven’t run into anyone in a long time. #3…How should I pre set this camera in anticipation of this type of shot? #4…And last how would you grade this shot on a scale of 1-4… (1 being best)…. and please be honest….. I would like to post some of my shots on Flicker and don’t want to appear as dumb ….as I really am…… about photography. #5…. Camera: FinePix S5100 F/5.6 Expo 1/550 ISO 64 Focal length 8mm Max Aperture 3 Last edited by DaneCo; 09-17-2009 at 12:29 AM. Reason: larger pic |
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I would crop out the portion of your car that is in the lower right of the photo.
Also, I think it is a little out of focus. I know it would be hard to pick a spot and focus while driving as fast as you were but thats me. Also there is no contrast between the mountain and the sky line. I am not GIMP/Photoshop expert but I believe there are things you can do to give it definition. I would give it a 2 (but it's more than I have done as far as driving and shooting so you get bonus imagination points.) |
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I'm not a professional critic but the things that i notie about it are:
1. Lack of overall contrast. 2. My eye floats around the scene with no point to anchor the shot. ( this may be related to the lack of contrast. Have you tried panning this shot? Keep focus on the truck while following it. Leasds to a blurred background. Overall i feel the shot is about a 3. It is worth posting on Flickr as you may recieve more comments. |
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