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Old 04-29-2009, 05:13 PM
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How do you feel about the composition of the photo and the use of black & white? Thanks for your comments!

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Old 04-29-2009, 06:28 PM
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I like the use of black & white.. gives it an old school feel and lots of texture. Composition: it feels like your shooting down on top of him. I think you'd like a little more room above him (as your cropping his head a bit) and to include more of the wave - if you had done this think of how sick it would be. I think that's all it would've taken to make this a really incredible photo. How did you take this? In the water? On a boat or jet ski or somethign?
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Thanks Eric, great feedback....I actually took this shot from a pier in Huntington Beach, CA.
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Old 04-29-2009, 09:22 PM
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I really like it. Love the old school look. I agree about the crop, I wouldn't take anything off, but it would have been better if you could had more to the top of the image.

Still a nice capture.
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Old 05-02-2009, 05:53 PM
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Great old school pic, I agree with all the above mentioned and for the hair cut of the surfer, from 50's or 60's
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Real nice classic shot with the long board, i love it, too bad for the top of the head crop.
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aside from the head crop it is great. i like to use black and white for surf on stormy days to get rid of all the grays but i really like the shot.
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