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Old 04-21-2009, 02:21 AM
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Went to Brooklyn and shot some few pictures.Here is my zooming picture of bridge which i like. You can citique if there is anything more that needed to be done.CUz i can go next time and think of what you have said.Thanks
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Old 04-21-2009, 02:59 AM
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Love the effect you did, i will have to try one. I think you would get more response in landscape critique than in sports action because other than zooming, there is not much action going on. Maybe try to make the horizon straight too, it would help.
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Old 04-21-2009, 03:13 AM
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I think this photo might belong in some other thread than Sports/action. Like maybe landscapes/cityscape. I can see if you think a zoom function might be action on the photographers part, but this thread is for posted sports related photos. Photo might work better at night, when you see the headlights of cars.
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It doesn't quite work for me. The zoom causes my eyes to gravitate toward the center of the photo but there isn't anything there to look at.
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Old 04-23-2009, 01:29 PM
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Sorry prachin but I'll have to agree with archersdad...doesn't work for me either...it kind a makes me dizzy...
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