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[RyanAtaylor]

Hi, I'd like to know what you all think.

[jprime84]

The crop is certainly original, maybe a bit too narrow. I feel like I want to see all of the cyclist. I cant decide whether he or the girl is the subject. Also, the power lines tend to lead my eye away from them. They could probably be cloned out pretty well.

The lighting is very dramatic though, so thats cool.

[smc1377]

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[ericw]

Visually I feel like there's too much going on in this photo and I can't really tell what's actually taking place.

[RyanAtaylor]

Oops. I've read them now so from now on I'll go by them. So, exif info? Is this info on the camera? Also so we need to have specific questions about our photos beforehand?

[takethislife5150]

The subject and crop are interesting, it'd be nice to see what the original would be like

[bradzo66]

Originally Posted by RyanAtaylor

Oops. I've read them now so from now on I'll go by them. So, exif info? Is this info on the camera? Also so we need to have specific questions about our photos beforehand?

Hey dude , I like it , I think its got a lot going for it, would be good to see EXIF to see what yr settings were. I like the darkness the lack of small detail appeals to me for some sort of artistic reason and the glimmer of colour in the background sky adds to the over all feel , now this is just my opinion which could be worth jack , as for posting its good if you can have a specific area of concern with yr photo , and EXIF will help people critique your settings as well as composition , if you just want to hear what people think throw it up in Share your shots . No EXIF required no critiquing . Anyway , Welcome to DPS look forward to seeing more of yr work . All the best