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Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL F-stop - f/11 Exposure time - 1/1000 sec. Iso Speed - 400 This was probably my first series of action shots. How can I improve? I am not very familiar with post-processing images, but would like to know if there's anything I can do with this picture to improve it? Any general critique - ideas are welcome ![]() Thanks! Last edited by haziq_a; 01-30-2009 at 06:20 PM. Reason: Wrong Image size |
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I like the shot, it shows movenment that is interesting to look at.
i like the way you left some room to the front of the jumper to jump into but i think it could have been better if the jumper had room to jump higher, he looks like he is going to hit his head right now.
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I'd ask the jumper to look a little more towards the sun, so that his face is less covered in shadows. That, or put up a light stand with a strobe to fill in the shadows. I'd also move the camera further down looking up at the jumper, so that you get more separation between the jumper and the background.
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