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Picture was taken from the car, I had no idea that there was a marathon that day. Was in Nakijin, Okinawa JP, the road of this place are one go and one come. I was in the intersection to continue with my family trip.
![]() Number 1 by NetteRequena, on Flickr Camera: Nikon D60 Exposure: 0.008 sec (1/125) Aperture: f/5.6 Focal Length: 55 mm ISO Speed: 200 Flash: No Flash
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It's from the side and mostly the back. Could be anyone in the race. What you needed was get down near the finish nine and take it then.
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It was taken from the car, I had no idea that there was a marathon that day. But I take picture for the rest of the guys
Him was the winner at the moment and for a lot.
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in order to get a good critique, you'll need to read the rules/guidelines for the critique section and include the information they ask for. Thank you in advance for doing so and then editing your post!
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I agree with Jim. The panning technique was executed well. The composition and perspective needs some work.
You stated this was a spur of the moment shot, and for that, you did very well. For the image to be stronger: 1. That spectator has to go 2. Your perspective needed to be from the front to allow for the runner to run to and past you. Also, it may also capture runners behind 3. A tighter crop is in order
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Thank you all
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Great so are you going to ask what you wanted help with??
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Yes Ma'am, I was wondering should crop it or not, but Hill Country Hack already answer my question
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Musta been a mind reader
Please be sure to follow the guidelines on your next post. txs!
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I will, Thank you for the help.
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