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08-20-2010, 12:05 PM
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Hi TimDav, please take a moment to review the Critique Forum Rules and adjust your post accordingly. Thanks
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08-20-2010, 03:22 PM
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What specifically are you looking for critique on?
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08-23-2010, 03:55 PM
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I think the cropping should be different to focus on either ALL of the planes or one in particular. I am not sure of the exact focus of your image except the US NAVY on the bottom of the one planes wing.
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08-31-2010, 06:39 PM
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Next time try to take that picture with a smaller zoom lens so that you get the diamond in the shot. Or go for a longer zoom lens to get just one of the planes. Getting the jumble somewhere in the middle is very disconcerting.
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