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Old 10-27-2009, 03:33 AM
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Hi all,
I'd like your opinions on this photo. I'm most interested in composition, color and anything else you care to comment on is welcome!! I'm new to this, so any comments or tips are welcome!

Lauren

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Camera: Sony DSC-H20
Exposure: 0.013 sec (1/80)
Aperture: f/4.4
Focal Length: 63 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Auto, Did not fire
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Old 10-29-2009, 01:48 PM
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Composition and color look nice, perhaps just a tad dark, The image has too much noise and I don't really care for the texture overlay (those specks and spots all over the image). It also appears out of focus, your aperture also needs to be stopped down, a lower ISO used and a tripod next time around.
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Old 10-29-2009, 03:02 PM
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murtasma- Thanks for your comments! The colors are my favorite part of this image, the sky is just awesome in my opinion. I was going for something sort of "old time cinematic". I'm going to try and lighten it up a bit...next time I will definitely use a lower iso next time, im still learning

Thanks, Lauren
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