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Old 09-17-2009, 11:58 PM
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Looking for critique on my post work. I know I still have the tan lines, but I'm still looking for a way to get rid of them, so it looks as thou they were never there.

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ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: +1/3 EV
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Old 09-18-2009, 02:05 AM
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Looks good to me. Skin is smooth but still natural looking. I love the pink tint you gave her lips. The eyes are nice and sharp - at first I thought they'd been overly brightened, but they were pretty bright in the original. If you figure out how to get rid of the tan lines, repost it - I'd love to see.

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Old 09-18-2009, 02:20 AM
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tan lines. there are a couple of ways to do this.
#1. use the clone tool, set to darken and lower the opacity level to about 15% to start with. Use the area right next to the light area and clone away
#2. use the pick tool to pick a color right next to the lighter area. start painting over it with a very soft brush and with a 5-10% opacity(on a duplicate layer of course). If its too dark, lower the opacity of the layer
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Old 09-18-2009, 02:41 AM
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Her eyes just look fake or something??????
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Hi Kevin. Overall I think your processing looks good.

+1 for windriders suggestions. I've used the first one and it works fabulously!

What stands out to me is her nose. I think whatever smoothing technique you used removed all definition from her nose and it almost seems invisible to me. Not sure what technique would work best (burn maybe on a separate dupe layer?) but I think bringing back some of the shadows/curvature of her nose would help.

Beautiful model and picture.
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Thanks everyone.....................

Her eyes were just really white, I hardly did anything to the whites.
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I saw somewhere (a little late and inebriated right now) that a women demanded the tan lines in the photo, after the photog cloned them out. I think it was on a different forum. Are you sure she wants them gone?
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I saw somewhere (a little late and inebriated right now) that a women demanded the tan lines in the photo, after the photog cloned them out. I think it was on a different forum. Are you sure she wants them gone?
No she didn't have a problem with them. I live in a beach town in Florida, everyone has tan lines.....except for the people that go to the tanning salons. I honestly kinda think their cute on girls. About 99% feel differently about them thou.
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