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No critique, just wanted to say I love it! Looks really sci-fi - as if he was in the Matrix or something.
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Too much wall on the left and it actually looks like you snuck a peek around the corner to steal the shot.
The thing that makes candid shots interesting for me is that the person is more than just a character. They have to somehow interact - or clash - with their surroundings. This guy's pose is boring and I don't visually tie him in with anything else. In other words, he's interesting, but the picture is not. Does that even make sense???
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I re-cropped it and do actually like the composition a bit better. That was a good suggestion. I personally don't mind his pose. I think his nonchalance is an aspect of his character that i was drawn to in the first place.
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The crop definitely improves it. Is it just me, or does his beard look painted on?
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