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Old 09-06-2009, 02:14 PM
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Default Kombi VW - HDR + lomo

Hi everyone
I took this photo on my first day with my new camera (Nikon D60)
I'm a newbie, so I'd like do know your opinion to improve my shots, thank you

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Old 09-13-2009, 04:25 PM
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Hi everyone
I took this photo on my first day with my new camera (Nikon D60)
I'm a newbie, so I'd like do know your opinion to improve my shots, thank you

kombi vw

Nikon D60
22mm
F/4
ISO 640
Hi there. I like the shot and the treatment. It reminds me of a photo you would equate with Cuba in the old days. When you are asking for feedback you should be specific about your concerns regarding the image. This will provide more focus for the viewer. The only suggestion I have is to possibly bump up the vibrance/ saturation a bit, and black levels (or curves) to increase the punch of the image, but that is only if you are not happy with those aspects of this image.
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Old 09-19-2009, 07:51 PM
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this one would would be cool in black and white leaving the blue parts of the car in color.
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Old 09-19-2009, 10:28 PM
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The "hdr halo" is too visible. I'd do the hdr part again. And the composition could be better if there was more space around the car. Maybe add a little "dof" blur to the wall in the background.

I like the colors though they could use a slight desaturation. Sharpness is <3.
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