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Old 07-19-2009, 03:56 PM
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Hi. I'd submitted two HDR so far. The first,ie of Swoyambhunath,Nepal, had a lots of flaws.The second one,that of Dharahara,had fewer flaws. This is my third attempt in HDR. Here I was actually after the rainbow,looking for something that could pair up.Please critique. Your critiques can help me reduce flaws.
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Old 07-19-2009, 09:54 PM
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As far the HDR, I think you did a really nice job. I love the composition with the statue at the end of the rainbow. For an effective image overall though, I think you need to clone out telephone lines and birds. Good job.
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Old 07-20-2009, 07:57 AM
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As far the HDR, I think you did a really nice job. I love the composition with the statue at the end of the rainbow. For an effective image overall though, I think you need to clone out telephone lines and birds. Good job.
Thank you Denja. Yes the wires are distracting. Next time I'll try to post one without wires and birds on them.
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