Composition and treatment make sense?

[cciotti]

Please comment on the composition and your impression of the treatment. Thanks.



Camera make: NIKON
Camera model: COOLPIX S700
Date/Time: 2009:06:23 17:23:08
Resolution: 800 x 583
Flash used: No (auto)
Focal length: 11.5mm (35mm equivalent: 54mm)
Exposure time: 0.0084 s (1/119)
Aperture: f/3.4
ISO equiv: 64
Exposure bias: -0.70
Whitebalance: Auto
Metering Mode: matrix
Exposure: program (auto)

[vsa]

Maybe crop a bit from the bottom and right. It's ok though.

Treatment is somewhat over the top in my opinion. Take it back a few steps.
Don't stop experimenting!

[Murtasma]

I like the impression of rain this image gives me I do think the shadows are really blocked up and lacking, You may have pushed your adjustments a little to far. I think this processing on an image where it's actually raining and you can see rain drops would look sweet. Thank you for sharing.