Textured Art : I'm home ,Papa

[iskandar]

I'd play a song that would never ever end




Papa, do you still remember?
just the two of us
sitting, waiting, wishing.
I won't let go Papa.
I won't go...
I'd rather stay here
in your arms.

I'm home , Papa.
I'm home,
but you ain't there.


Added an overlay of textures to this shot. Kinda eerie looking, gave it a green overall tone, cracked and battered. A longing. I just wanna know if this is strong enough to be emotive or evoking some kinda emotions into you viewers. I love doing this kinda stuff, so I need a green light to keep continuing with this concept.

Camera: Canon Powershot S5 IS
Exposure: 0.00
ISO Speed: 80
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off

Thanks alot! This is my debut post!!!

[geekgirl415]

I like it - the moodiness, the color and the texture work for me.

[windrider86]

My one and only suggestion is to perhaps have less green all over the tree trunk.

[barladeanca]

I really like this. To me, it perfectly translates the mood of the poem

Great job! Wish I could do this...

Andreea

[srt]

Ooo I like this... Great texture!! But I think that the whole pic looks a little too uniform, and in the actual photo I wouldn't have put the little chair right in front of the tree trunk....but I definately do think that you're on the right track