potrait with building background

[wxyzarch]

all, this photo taken by me during my recent trip to malacca, malaysia..with frds of mine.
an actual shot is all the background is cleared...i tried to make it blur with photoshop to enhance more on the models...
pls let me know how to improve more on the photo effect and any composition or light that need to be adjusted...thx

EXIF
Camera: Canon G10
Exposure: 1/200
Aperture: f/3.2
Focal Length: 10.8mm
ISO 100

[Murtasma]

The grass in front of the ladies feet should be sharp and in focus as well since the girls are sitting within the same plane there. That's not how depth of field works and is pretty obvious photoshop was used to create the blurred effect. Also there are some parts of the plant next to the girl furthest from the camera that needs to be masked as well. The area is right near her arm that is on her knee.

Other then that composition, color, pose all look excellent. I would just correct those two minor problems.

[windrider86]

Did you mean to delete your image?

[wxyzarch]

eh...i accidentally remove it from my flickr...

but here is the revised picture...thx for the advice