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Hi all, this pic is the result of the combination of two pics, both were taken with my Camera Reflex Canon EOS Rebel G, film Kodak Gold 200 later scanned, therefore there is no EXIF available.

can you please critic, composition??

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it's definitely interesting
and good job putting them together

but honestly, i think the pictures don't really mesh well
they would be better separately i think

nice idea though

it may work a little better if you made the water not quite so bright blue
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Nice job merging two separate images. I love the colors in this image but I think you may have over saturated the cyans just a hair. I would try dialing it back just a little so it doesn't over power the rest of the scene so much.
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Thanks for your comments, I can try as suggested
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Thanks Muertasma for your comments, I will go to DDR to see cyan reduction
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Hi all, this pic is the result of the combination of two pics, both were taken with my Camera Reflex Canon EOS Rebel G, film Kodak Gold 200 later scanned, therefore there is no EXIF available.

can you please critic, composition??

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tone down the blue sea make it look like a storm
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Ok I will try
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