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Old 03-28-2009, 10:01 PM
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Default a couple of HDR tries..

heres a couple of new tries at HDR. posting an exterior..paying closer attention to a wide range of tones..
please tell me how im doing and what i can do to improve.
i have an interior that i'll post up tomorrow.


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Old 03-30-2009, 02:18 PM
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Was the building white? To me it looks a little over burned and muddy.
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Old 03-30-2009, 02:44 PM
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Yeah, the HDR process really made this building look unnatural -- sorry. The muddiness and glow around the edges are classic HDR problems.
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Yeah, the HDR process really made this building look unnatural -- sorry. The muddiness and glow around the edges are classic HDR problems.

They are problems like you say, but if you know how to use the software correctly they can be avoided.

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Old 04-05-2009, 11:08 PM
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Yeah, the murky white definitely detracts, and the vignette looks very artificial
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