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Old 03-05-2009, 07:40 AM
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Alright, Take two! using Graduated filters with a subject included in the photo. This was an old photo of a statue I took. I wanted the sky to turn out very dark and I think I accomplished this. But, does the statue sit well in the photo? Does it blend-in or stand out? How is my composition? Is it pleasing to the eye? What version do you like better...before or after?

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Old 03-05-2009, 09:50 AM
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statue needed details:
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Old 03-05-2009, 10:53 AM
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Well, Adam, I'd been surfing DPS and forgot which section I was in...based on your title and then after looking at your photo I thought i was looking at a tutorial on graduated filters!

I think it is beautiful as is! Is that a star in the upper left? I really love the dramatic feel. You've used the combination of color and composition to create a very intriguing capture.
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Old 03-05-2009, 01:41 PM
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Sorry ken, I prefer the original. There's enough detail on my (calibrated) monitor. A slight (less than 1/3ev) up in exposure would be fine, but I think you've gone a bit far with it.
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Old 03-05-2009, 02:03 PM
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Sorry ken, I prefer the original. There's enough detail on my (calibrated) monitor. A slight (less than 1/3ev) up in exposure would be fine, but I think you've gone a bit far with it.
Agreed, the banding in the sky is a bit much.
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