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Ooooooh I like it. Well done
![]() One thing I was wondering was if the pylon looks a bit odd. I don't mean the smaller one but rather the larger one right behind the witches hat. I wonder if it might look better cloned out? I'm not sure if it would be possible to take again but stand in a slightly different position so that the pylon falls behind the witches hat? This might also get the structure out if the middle of the frame and place it into one of the sweet spots. Either way its a lovely image and the pylon is just a thought. Its still better then what I could do LOL. |
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What do you think leaves a lot of doors wide open. lol
I like the fact that you didnt make it look all cartoony, now if you want to talk about composition.......... Try to do an imaginary tic tac toe grid when you are shooting and place the main points of your focal point on the main lines of that grid. rule of thirds I just think it would add more interest if the building were not right in the middle and didnt have power lines sticking up from behind it
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I would rotate it so the roof line and steps are more or less horizontal, crop in to put the building at the right third line and get rid of the rather unappealing grass at the bottom and clone out the electrical stuff.
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