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Please critique everything...not very heavily processed, just framing and a small glow added for effect...
This is only my second photo posted, but I'm trying !!! Here's the full size: http://www.flickr.com/photos/32975536@N05/3081488626/
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Hmm...well, first thing I notice is how soft it is. Maybe that's from the processed glow. ??
Also, can you post your exif data? I believe the critique rules indicate you should post that to help those that provide feedback.
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Aimee Canon XSi, 18-55mm IS, Tamron 70-300, and Canon 50mm 1.8 II; Canon PowerShot S3 IS My Flickr My Blog Like Me? Last edited by SandeeWig; 12-04-2008 at 02:24 AM. Reason: added link to critique rules |
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Aimee,
Thank you, and I'd be more than happy to include the EXIF data as soon as I can figure out how to get it out of Photoshop !! I'm very new to digital...an old throwback to film. And yes, I purposefully diffused the print, as I really prefer the softer look for these older buildings/bridges...just my preference! Figured it out...Here's the EXIF data Make - NIKON CORPORATION Model - NIKON D40 Orientation - Top left XResolution - 300.00 YResolution - 300.00 ResolutionUnit - Inch Software - Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows DateTime - 2008:12:03 21:06:32 YCbCrPositioning - Centered ExifOffset - 228 ExposureTime - 1/160 seconds FNumber - 6.30 ExposureProgram - Not defined ISOSpeedRatings - 200 ExifVersion - 0221 DateTimeOriginal - 2008:09:20 14:41:33 DateTimeDigitized - 2008:09:20 14:41:33 ComponentsConfiguration - YCbCr ExposureBiasValue - 0.00 MaxApertureValue - F 3.48 MeteringMode - Multi-segment LightSource - Auto Flash - Flash not fired, compulsory flash mode FocalLength - 18 mm UserComment - SubsecTime - 70 SubsecTimeOriginal - 70 SubsecTimeDigitized - 70 FlashPixVersion - 0100 ColorSpace - sRGB ExifImageWidth - 3308 ExifImageHeight - 2600 InteroperabilityOffset - 832 SensingMethod - One-chip color area sensor FileSource - Other SceneType - Other CustomRendered - Normal process ExposureMode - Auto White Balance - Auto DigitalZoomRatio - 1 x FocalLengthIn35mmFilm - 27 mm SceneCaptureType - Standard GainControl - None Contrast - Normal Saturation - Normal Sharpness - Normal SubjectDistanceRange - Unknown Thumbnail: - Compression - 6 (JPG) XResolution - 72 YResolution - 72 ResolutionUnit - Inch JpegIFOffset - 958 JpegIFByteCount - 4903
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I like the shot overall - the glow on the bridge gives it a fantasy quality.
The sky over the bridge is very very white - it seems to overwhelm the shot. Perhaps you could burn in the sky a bit, or otherwise take its brightness down.
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