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My opinion is that it's rare (I almost said never) where I find that selective coloring works.
What you have to ask yourself (in my opinion) is what do you add to the image by doing the selective color? Is the point of interest actually the drums because that's what you do by doing the coloring this way? In the end, it just doesn't work for me. Part of it is that it's a pretty busy photo that isn't much more than a travel snap shot. |
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In a way, it is a snap shot as all I cared about was taking her picture just as they're done performing (I didn't realize I knew her until it's too late). But I was hoping I could fake it. I guess a snap-shot is a snap shot, no matter how it's processed. But I'll take note of your advice about applying selective-coloring (adding something instead of deducing). It's pretty much what every pro says whenever someone wants to do something crazy with their photos. Thank you. |
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I find partial desaturating of the background can be effective. The colors are muted except the drums. A more subtle way of of emphasizing a point of interest.
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My first impression when looking into this picture was that selective color separation does not work. I think this is because, in my opinion, this picture is not (only) about the drums. As I see it, it is about people and - then - drums. Thus I absolutely agree with flytyer57, I would leave the persons in the picture also in color. Another idea that came to my mind as worth trying, is to remove color also from these wooden supporting frames of the drums - I have a feeling that they are not wort highlighting. Background, indeed, is cluttered and disturbing, in my opinion, too. Try blurring and/or desaturation, as suggested already. Quote:
I hope this was of help for you. PS Please share the picture with us once you use (some of) the suggestions from feedback on this photo.
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The way the picture is composed, the drums are not the focus. Maybe if you had some ND filters and could take a long exposure to blur the movement of the drummer keeping the drums sharp along with partial desaturation (along with a change of perspective).
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Thank you so much for your advice. Instead of an in-your-face change, I went a more subtle approach. I'm happy with the result. Much much happier than the first one. And I learned it all from you guys.
![]() Partial desaturation and blurring, all to feature the drums and the drummer. It makes much more sens. What I had a hard time was partially separating the stand from the drums. I can't make it look natural that way. So I settled for this image and maybe when I learn better technique, I'll try it again. Give me some nitpicks though, if there's something I missed. Again, thank you. |
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