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This is my first hdr. would like to know the good and the bad.

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Old 06-11-2011, 04:18 AM
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You know, I actually really like this one. It's like it's almost looks at first glance as though it's overdone, but it's not, and I find myself really liking it. Especially great for a first HDR attempt! (my first HDR looked NOTHING like this, haha).
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Well I can't find much bad - except for the level, the horizon looks slanted to me. Very nice work -especially for a first attempt. I like it too
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thankyou . so is there a way to correct the level?
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thankyou . so is there a way to correct the level?
Rotate and crop.
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Old 06-21-2011, 09:28 PM
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Well I can't find much bad - except for the level, the horizon looks slanted to me. Very nice work -especially for a first attempt. I like it too
I actually think the slant in the horizon gives the image a bit of tension and drama, which is also represented in the gloomy clouds. I guess just a bit of preference. Nice job!
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personally i'd dodge a bit on the car to make it pop a bit and bring some color back
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yeah really good effort I would say!

Please keep the horizon slanted as I agree with the poster who said it adds tension and drama... I also think it almost gives the impression the car is moving rather than being stationery.

I love the sky and think it looks great... very moody and dramatic.

I love the texture in the road too.

However I do feel that the car looks almost too shiny and a bit plastic looking compared the the rest of the image?

Not sure if that's just me, or if there's anyway of correcting that anyway... it might just be that's how the car looks?

Just a minor point though and overall I think its a fantastic image
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Nice job, I'm dieing to try HDR. I was muttering to myself when I saw the sky, "that looks ominious" lol.
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