While my son was driving one day..

[phil24]

I am using a trial version of Lightroom, per suggestions of many of you, thanks!
I am always interested in critique on composition as that is what gets people to look at a shot, but I have not tried any B& W since I was in high school graphics class back in the mid 70's. This shot just screamed B&W to me so I gave it a go.

1. This is a straight conversion, but should it be lighter?

2. Would using the presets create a better image, and if so, which ones would you recommend? The inevitable next question Why? ( If I know why, then I can use that to make decisions in the future)

3. There is some blur, I was riding in the car with my son driving, (18 yr old new driver, brave of me to be shooting) In the foreground I think it adds to the shot, but I value your opinions.

As always thanks for all of your input,and for sharing your part of the world through your lens.



Camera Nikon D90
Exposure 0.004 sec (1/250)
Aperture f/10.0
Focal Length 18 mm
ISO Speed 2000
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash No Flash
Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 3.4

[pharris201]

Hi Phil
I'm also new to Lightroom but love it (buy it). I would go through the presets and see what looks good as a start. Lots of times i watch both the settings and the pictures to see what is happening. Then when I am close I do tweaking on my own.

Its a good start but work on it. Perspective is there , composition is there. Just spend some time. Good luck

[phil24]

Thanks. I have a coupon to buy it for $99.00 so its not a huge investment by any means. I used to live in your part of the world, one of the first 200 families to move into Sterling many years ago...