Engagement Multiple Exposure

[midnightpro]

I have a few questions. First is it OK that i have two different horizens in this shot? Second does the combination of B&W and color work in this shot? Lastly, is there an image that i should change the opactiy up or down?

Exif data

Camera Sony DSLR-A700
Exposure 0.004 sec (1/250)
Aperture f/9.0
Focal Length 45 mm
ISO Speed 200
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash Auto, Did not fire

[Bruce A]

I don't know quite what to suggest about this, but I like what you've done. It has a certain charm and I can't say whether there's anything that would improve it. If anything maybe the crossed hands could be a little more centered. Perhaps someone with more experience might chime in here. Good work afaic.

[midnightpro]

Thanks i will try that. I had not thought about that and when i made the shot i did not know how to move the pictures around. I have since learned and will see how that looks.

[zona5101]

i thunk you went one too many. I think I'd like it better without the hands...just the two shots of the couple...its pretty busy as is...

[arkusm]

I agree with removing the hands overlay. I would also try to put shot on the right so the railing is over-lapping. This will require more editing than simply adjusting the opacity but should give you better final composition. Cheers