#1 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2011, 10:18 AM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Jan 2010
Posts: 3
Default HDR sunset: first attempt

This is my first HDR attempt. I have first read some critiques on the forum, and it is not that easy to find a nice balance for your picture. I used photomatix and Topaz for the noise. I didn't yet used the original image to remove the highlight clipping of the sun.
Ps: how can I put the image directly into this thread?

First HDR | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

First HDR
__________________
Nikon D200 - AF-S DX VR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G
AF-S Micro NIKKOR 60mm f/2.8G ED

Last edited by windrider86; 03-17-2011 at 12:41 PM. Reason: added photo for you
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2011, 12:31 PM
Gulf Coast Girl's Avatar
Quit honking Im reloading
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: NW Florida
Posts: 585
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dave303 View Post
This is my first HDR attempt. I have first read some critiques on the forum, and it is not that easy to find a nice balance for your picture. I used photomatix and Topaz for the noise. I didn't yet used the original image to remove the highlight clipping of the sun.
Ps: how can I put the image directly into this thread?
Very nice , TFS

I'm just learning about HDR so I don't know if there's anything you could have done to make it different / better just wanted to say I like the photo. I find HDR very appealing.

To post a photo in a thread from your flickr acct. just follow these simple steps from the photo page on flickr



Make sure you don't choose the large size as DPS has a max of 740 on the long side of the photo rule. The second "medium" option seems to be the appropriate size.

One other thing I also do is add target="_blank" just before the word title=. That will open the image in a new window instead of redirecting the reader's DPS window. It drives me bonkers when links and images don't open in a new window..... but I'm just fussy like that
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2011, 07:05 PM
Krusty79's Avatar
Smart ass (_e=mc2_)
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: San Francisco Bay Area
Posts: 3,364
Default

I'm still experimenting with HDR also and I think I'm going to post my first decent one here. I think you have a beautiful image. It just looks a bit underexposed to me. Did you take shots at -2, 0, +2 EV?
__________________
GREG - Canon XS with 18-55 kit
flickr
flickriver
My 500px
"You can't be young forever, but you can always be immature." - Larry Andersen.
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 03-18-2011, 02:13 AM
JamesBrandon's Avatar
DPS Writer
 
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Fort Worth
Posts: 11
Default

Dave,

This isn't a bad first attempt at HDR, very impressed!

As far as HDR processing goes, you've got a halo running above the length of the tree line. Not sure if you are well versed in photoshop, but this can be fixed by masking in one of the original skies.

As far as composition goes, shots like these need a foreground element/subject. Try not to think of sunsets as your subject but as a backdrop or complimenting element to a main subject. We've all seen sunsets and gorgeous ones at that, and they are incredibly over-photographed. Because of this, you want to use a sunset to make something else in the image look that much more beautiful. Just something to think about!

The foreground element can be something simple as well, like an old wooden fence post, or a tractor or power lines or anything.

Keep up the good work!
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0