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Old 03-16-2011, 04:47 PM
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This is my first posting on this forum. I have been shooting for 4 to 5 years and never really receive constructive critism on my work from folks with the same interest. I am looking forward to your honest critique on my photos. Also, it seems as though my shots are not as vibrant as most shots I see from others. Help!

Either way, these are recent maternity shots of my wife. Let me know your thoughts in terms of composition, color and anything else you can find. : )
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Old 03-17-2011, 12:45 PM
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It looks a bit dark to me. Do you have your exif info to share with us?

The eye generally looks from left to right, you might consider flipping it
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Old 03-21-2011, 03:46 PM
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Old 03-22-2011, 06:01 PM
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Why so small?
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Old 03-24-2011, 10:48 PM
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Too small.

Okay, it's a bit dark, but I like the overall effect of the light behind her shining along her tummy.
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