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Old 08-08-2010, 06:34 AM
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was experimenting on making HDR with photomatix..
i live in a country where there is no puffy clouds at all.. LOL
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Old 08-08-2010, 08:40 AM
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Hi,
I really like this. The smoothness of your HDR treatment and the colours are great! I always look around the edge of buildings, mostly where they interact with the sky and you have controlled the halo pretty well. This for me, makes or breaks a hdr. This view would look great just after the sun had gone down.
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Old 08-15-2010, 08:26 AM
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I like it, you could tone down the colors a little bit, but thats just my opinion. I think it is good that you aren't over doing the HDR. Keep up the good work!
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Old 08-16-2010, 06:00 AM
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This is a great shot. Nicely composed and great colors. TFS
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Old 08-16-2010, 06:31 PM
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Old 08-17-2010, 03:40 AM
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You nailed it for your first try! It looks very smooth and natural. The only thing I would say could be fixed is the very very slight halos around the buildings. Like I said they aren't too noticeable and blend pretty well with the sky, but if your looking closely, you can see them. Also, maybe edit out the top left section of those rails? To me they don't add anything to the picture. Good shot though and thanks for sharing!
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