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Three shots handheld merged to create HDR in photomatix
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Old 04-15-2010, 10:38 PM
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The head of the lady seems to be transparent....i corrected it with photoshop but couldnt upload it. Please critique for any other issues
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Any comments or criticism!!!!
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I don't mind seeing the image level, remove the person on the left and crop out some foreground. Sample for illustration purpose.

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Here's my attempt on adding some value... what he said - horizontals MUST be horizontal when intended to be horizontal.
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I'd go with LoveDSLR's approach. And add some saturation to the sky. Otherwise it's pretty cool photo.
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A nice subtle HDR!!! The crop sure works for this image though.
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