DPS Virgin

[Nicholas Allen]

i took this shot at a building site with Olympus E3. ISO 100, 8000 @ f4, 60mm.




This is my first time uploading to DPS and for critique

[peeperita]

hey, nicholas.....welcome to critique......and to dps for that matter.....

you did well with the proper sized image and your exif.....only one little thing and your offering will be complete......you need to take a moment and think of a specific question about your image.....what is it that you like or don't like about it?.....that usually provides our members with a good jumping off point for their critique.....

thanks

peeper

[Nicholas Allen]

Hi and thanks for the welcome. My reason for submitting this pic is that I think it's ok but it was rejected when I submitted it to a comp and they didn't explain why. So I guess my question is- What's wrong with this picture? What could I change to improve it?

Cheers

[Murtasma]

Do you have a URL to the competition. With out reading the rules there really is no way to tell why it was rejected. Personally I think it's a good image and I like it. I can give a critique later but I would like to know the rules if you have them available to assist with the critique.