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Old 02-05-2010, 08:24 PM
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This is my first time getting a critique. I'm not sure if this should go here or in macro. I chose here because I did choose to make it a storyboard.



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This photo makes me feel just a little bit of hope that spring is coming!
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Old 02-07-2010, 09:45 PM
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I quite like it. It's a very pretty and uplifting set of photos. It looks like a greeting card.
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Old 02-07-2010, 11:58 PM
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The bottom left's photo's colors seem a bit off. I think its too bright. Try adding more contrast to it. Maybe its a personal preference for me.

I hope you forgive me for editing your photo . In this picture I added contrast to the entire photo.
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Old 02-08-2010, 12:03 AM
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This is cheery!
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