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I agree with hotsoup about the nose; it does look a little flat.
Also, the thing I noticed with your black and white processing is that you lose the impact of her hat. Other than that, I think you did a great job with the processing; it isn't overdone at all. I would maybe recommend seeing how a color photo looks instead of the black and white. If you do stick with a color version, I would tone down the reds in her skin. On my monitor, he face looks a little on the red side. I like your choice of crop, too! Nice job!
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Nope, however the hair on the left of the final desaturated picture could be given some consideration.
To a layperson their eyes may not travel there, as a photographic enthusiast it distracts my own. My opinions ![]() Dayton |
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