Boudoir... How would you do this different?

[FGPhotography]

I did my first Boudoir session this past week and really enjoyed it, so now I'm wanting to improve all around... Is there any advice on composition, model placement/positioning or anything of that sorts you'd change?

Camera: Nikon D80
Exposure: 0.008 sec (1/125)
Aperture: f/2.0
Focal Length: 50 mm
ISO Speed: 250
Exposure Bias: +5 EV
Flash: No Flash

I was working with poor lighting so had to do a fair amount of post editing to get this bright enough.....

Any advice/criticism would be appreciated! Thanks!

BTW if your wanting to see more, please go to my website and click on "Gorgeous Ladies"

[lputman]

Wow Fawn....look at you go! I love it!

[michellegphotos]

Love the pose...nice shot. Only critique is that her eyes seem to have some under eye circles I would have touched up, and the brightness on her face seems to blend her cheek in with her chest. Few photoshop corrections is all I'd suggest.

[WooD]

Originally Posted by lputman

Wow Fawn....look at you go! I love it!

+1

Works great!

[daddyoproductions]

Agree with the face critiques...eye bags are never sexy Otherwise fabulous!!!! Way better than any we've tried!

[FGPhotography]

Thank you everyone

Question, how would you get rid of the eye bags and increase the visibility of her jaw line? I'm still learning PS...

[michellegphotos]

There are tons of easy and free photoshop tutorials on youtube

[FGPhotography]

Thank you all for the critique - I couldn't get the chin not to fade so much into the chest, but i got rid of the bags Better?

[michellegphotos]

under eye circles def look better!

[APAPHOTO]

amazing edit with the eyebags!
Try cleaning up her hair line abit