Bri 2

[EOBeav]

Another shot from our portrait shoot last weekend. Just wanted some of your thoughts about coloring, angle, composition, and anything else you think works or doesn't work in this shot. Thanks in advance for your thoughtful comments.



EXIF data:

Camera: Canon EOS Digital Rebel XTi
Exposure: 0.008 sec (1/125)
Aperture: f/5.7
Focal Length: 85 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Flash: Off

Edited in GIMP

[SusanH1970]

Angle and composition work quite well for me!

But....it's too warm. She's kind of orange and the grass is a bit muddy. Try cooling it down just a touch.

Great pose, great smile, gorgous model!

[AnneWynne]

There seems to be a yellow cast. Other than that I like the composition. I wonder what it would have looked like if she had kicked off her sandles.

Anne

[lputman]

I think it such a cute picture. Did you process for this coloring effect?

[ebeard2802]

I think the composition is great! Excellent portrait! I have to agree with the color being a little warm, but overall, very nice shot!

[castman]

I am with everyone on the color. But looks like a great photo other than that.

[slvrwnd]

I find myself a little distracted by the patch of light between her ankles.....I keep looking at her and only seeing ankles

[EOBeav]

Thanks everybody. The coloring effect was purposeful. But, I did seem to give the poor girl a bad case of jaundice, didn't I? I'm going to play with it some more and see what I can do with it. I'll post back here when I'm done.

[Arun]

Composition is good and the model is gorgeoous however I keep wondering how different this may have turned out if you had taken the picture more at eye level rather than standing up.

Good capture though.

Thanks for sharing.

[EOBeav]

Originally Posted by Arun

Composition is good and the model is gorgeoous however I keep wondering how different this may have turned out if you had taken the picture more at eye level rather than standing up..

Thanks, Arun. Actually, my last post here was of her taken at eye level. It was interesting to see the difference between the two.