Going on a journey - TGV Paris, France

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TGV Check-in
Gare de l'Est
Paris

[Qanths]

This is a great shot. The only thing that I find confusing is that the story you are trying to tell isn't very clear. If you're trying to get the message of going on a journey across I would suggest a lone person walking determinedly to the doors of the train with a suitcase in his/her hand.

H.S.

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Thanks for your input - this photo is all about anticipation, I'd hope - the chef de gare in the blue hat checking the validity of the journey details, the young lady over his shoulder slightly apprehensive for the well-being of her fellow passengers, the motionless, stock-still figure of the platform attendant who has seen this scene all a hundred times before, and the quiet good humour of the assembled throng. All-in-all, I think we can feel safe that it was a journey that they all completed safely! Cheers

~CC