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03-14-2009, 07:47 AM
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Darcy tonight?
Does the yellow light bother anyone in the background? I was thinking going black and white? I needed that light on to focus on her eyes I need a darn flashlight or something
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03-14-2009, 12:17 PM
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I do think that it is quite distracting. I dont' think that turning it into B&W will make it any less distracting. Do you have any pp software that you could use to remove it?
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03-14-2009, 01:25 PM
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It's not so much the yellow light as the stand growing out of her face that distracts. I would definitely try to clone that out and maybe go for a lndscape rather than portrait aspect. You don't really need all that bedspread below her.
Other than that it's a nice shot.
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03-14-2009, 08:19 PM
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I'll try to get it out of there later
I ended up moving the light but this was an exposure test shot and I really liked her face in it I'll remove some of the bedding as well. Thanks for the comments!
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03-15-2009, 07:45 AM
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Well I did this really quick Im sure I could do a better job but anyways better or worse?
p.s. I really hate messing with things in photoshop In all the other photos no distracting elements but this was a test shot..... next time im gonna even watch for stuff on test shots lol!
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03-18-2009, 06:19 PM
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Lamp gone, much improved! I see you cropped some of the bottom of the bedspread off, I would crop it just a bit more... See where the shadow goes along the bedspread? Crop it there and see how you like it.
Love the model and the angle. I think your test shot looks better than most of my keepers
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03-18-2009, 08:07 PM
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I think the photo is much improved without the lamp. I would go as far as removing most of the bedspread, so that her right eye falls on the bottom 1/3 line.
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03-19-2009, 12:38 PM
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Is the lamp a different temperature of light than whatever is illuminating the main subject?
Maybe if it was fluorescent it wouldn't be as distracting to me, but just my opinion.
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