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yeah she was soooo nervous lol! She gave up about a half an hour earlier and I was like no we can do this! she is very pleased with the results and wants to do it again pumped!
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Yeah I have noticed that a lot of the prettiest models have body issues. They always think they will look bad or something. Be sure to keep talking to them and I find it is helpful to show them a photo or two as I am shooting just to let them know that the pictures look good. Usually helps them relax.

This is a great photo by the way. Only thing that I see that could have been improved on is that she should have moved a little farther foward on the bench so that the arm of the bench is not blocking her backside. But all in all a very good photo. Keep up the good work.
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Old 03-15-2009, 07:47 PM
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You know some very pretty girls! This is a fabulous shot.... not only do I really like the lighting on the model, but I love the row of ceilling lights stretching a way. A brilliant bit of added interest.

I'm undecided on the light directly above her head... on the one hand it's a bit distracting, but on the other, it gives the impression that it's that which is illuminating her which adds to the "environmental portrait" aspect.
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Old 03-15-2009, 09:36 PM
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I did do a version without all the lights in it It kinda looked boring so I stayed with this one

As far a the model it was her first time ever doing pictures we did sit for awhile and I tryed to relax her, showed her how to sit, and showed her the pictures. As the night when on she got more and more comfortable Were gonna shoot again I think it will be easier next time.
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Old 03-15-2009, 10:22 PM
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I am turning red LOL

Looks awesome!! There are two things I would change about this photo. The bottom of that pillar, it has that blue color at the bottom. Desaturate that and the light just directly above her head clone that out. That trail of lights looks sweet and the light above her head just kind of doesn't fit in.

Model is gorgeous and you captured her a very sexy photo of her.

Nice work again!
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Old 03-16-2009, 06:04 AM
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F%$# yeah a comment from Jason nice! Will do I'll try to post the new version tomorrow. thanks Jason!
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Old 03-16-2009, 06:18 AM
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nice! post it up for sure. like i said the photo looks sweet as it is but those 2 things stick out.
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