First Engagement Shots...Errr?!?!

[neltron3030]

I took these shots on the weekend for a good friend of mine and her fiance. I do a lot of street/city stuff typically, so this was different for me. Please do not hold back on the comments, I wasn't too thrilled with the results, though the couple loved them.

[lputman]

I've moved these from the critique section. Please review the http://digital-photography-school.co...rum-rules.html.

[leonaashlee]

Oh I really like them...my favorite is the second, but I love the expanse of the first too. Well done, and if they like them...that's what counts.

[MrLentzPhotography.com]

In my humble opinion: the first image could have been better without the horizon line at the center. It looks like a wonderful spot, why not experiment with the couple from different extreme angles? The icy patches would have made great contrast if they were laying down on them...

[outamyway]

The second one is good. A little over exposed but I like the couple in it. In the others,the guy needs to take his hands out of his pockets and put them on her. The last one would be a great shot had he been leaning on the wall with his right arm and had his left hand interacting with her. Compositionally, I like all 4.

[neltron3030]

Thanks for the feedback guys. I will keep everything in mind for next time. I felt really rushed on this shoot, not sure why.

[zona5101]

maybe it's the compression for uploading but they look overly sharp...