Dirty

[deltacsar665]

Hey all,
It's been a while since i last posted something here for some real critique, so i guessed i might as well post something here to humble myself. I pesonally like the dirty, grimey feel of the surroundings next to the pristine look of the guitar. So what do you guys think of the overall look ( lighting / composition ) and feel of this shot ?



Exposure: 0.02 sec (1/50)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 18 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: No Flash



Thanks for the feedback

[windrider86]

To me, it would be more interesting if the guitar were at an angle instead of straight up and down int he middle of the frame
Not so sure I am fond of the harsh white spot either.

[Niresangwa]

I agree, the angle doesn't do much to grab my attention. Where it not for the title of the post, I wouldnt have associated grunge with it either. I don't think that heavy vignette achieved it. A crushed beer can a couple of cigarette butts might be a good addition (jk)

I think it's a promising concept, and may be a good exercise in finding a more dramatic perspective, and as windrider mentioned, that flare of light needs to be controlled too.

Where it me, I might try getting in tighter and lower on the guitar. I would be tempted to offer an example of what I mean but I only have a PS3 Guitar Hero controller, so will refrain.

[deltacsar665]

Thanks for the critique guys, i'll see what i can do